By Blastily Editorial Team, PR & Media Relations · 3 min read

Most press releases don't fail because the business is boring. They fail because of small, fixable mistakes that make a journalist's job harder — or make them stop reading entirely.
Here are the coverage-killers we see most, and how to fix each one.
Mistake: Announcing something that only matters inside your company. Fix: Ask, "Would a stranger care?" If not, find the angle that matters to the public — or hold the release until you have one.
Mistake: "XYZ Company Announces Exciting Update." Fix: Be specific. Who, what, how many, where. Full guide: How to Write a Compelling Press Release Headline.
Mistake: Three paragraphs of company history before the news. Fix: Put the who, what, when, where and why in the first sentence or two. Refresher: What Are the 5 W's and H in a Press Release?
Mistake: "Revolutionary," "world-class," "game-changing." Fix: Replace adjectives with facts. More in How to Write a Press Release That Doesn't Sound Like Corporate Bragging.
Mistake: "We are delighted to embark on this exciting journey." Fix: Write something a human would actually say out loud — opinion, emotion or a story.
Mistake: Emailing every reporter in Calgary, regardless of beat. Fix: Build a targeted list. See How to Create a Media List for Your Press Release.
Mistake: A PDF or Word doc attached to a blank email. Fix: Paste the release into the body of the email. Link to photos in a shared folder.
Mistake: One generic email to 300 addresses. Fix: Short, personal pitches to a small number of well-matched reporters.
Mistake: Misspelled names, wrong titles, wrong dates. Fix: Proofread twice. Have someone else read it. Check every name and number.
Mistake: No media contact, or a generic inbox nobody checks. Fix: A real name, direct email and a phone number that gets answered — especially on the day you send.
Mistake: Friday at 4 p.m., the day before a long weekend, or during massive breaking news. Fix: Plan your send. See What's the Best Day and Time to Send a Press Release?
Mistake: Three emails and two calls in 48 hours. Fix: One polite follow-up after a few business days. Then move on.
Every one of these mistakes comes from the same place: writing for yourself instead of the journalist. Flip the perspective — what does a busy reporter need to say yes quickly? — and most mistakes disappear. Compare your draft against What's the Difference Between a Good and Bad Press Release? for a final check.
What's the single most common mistake? Sending news that only matters to the company sending it. Almost every other mistake becomes easier to fix once you've found an angle that matters to readers outside your building.
Want a second set of eyes before you hit send? Blastily reviews, sharpens and places your release. Start your Blast at blastily.com.
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